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Janine Daniel	6/25/2000 10:16:54 AM 9/6/2010 3:37:03 PM	2402

Hear me Merlin! incl. graphics

By: Janine Daniel

Author's Comments

This's the very first fantasy poem I wrote and it has a lot of emotional meaning for me.
My deepest thanks to all the people who have given me their wonderful comments about this poem.

Janine. 2004

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Lucinda Troth	Lucinda@troth100.in2home.co.uk		8/21/2000 4:26:17 PM
I love this poem Janine. It is so powerful and strong. You put such strength in words. A mystical, magical poem. I love it.
Trudie Raphael	nirvana60@go.com		9/12/2000 11:14:26 AM
When I read Merlin I was whisked away in my imagination to a place that I used to dream about when I was a little girl. Thanks for the memories. A beautifully written piece! Ten out of ten... :o)
Rachelle Wiegand	rwpoet@home.com		10/20/2000 4:16:20 AM
Janine, I really liked the creativity and specialness of this piece. I love magic, and the images your poem conjured up were very awesome! Very unique and cool~! Rachelle
Rachelle Wiegand	rwpoet@home.com		10/20/2000 4:19:33 AM
Janine, One other thought about this piece. It reminds me of Harry Potter. I really like it. Rachelle
Mary Stone	mid-lace@webtv.net		10/20/2000 4:22:09 AM
Very good Janine :)
Shannon Wendler	shannon7112@earthlink.net		10/20/2000 4:24:32 AM
I read this aloud. I like the feel to this. I felt like I was in a dream. Good writing here Janine. Shannon
Jeanie Johnson	wahconda@juno.com		10/20/2000 4:28:37 AM
This one was really exceptional, Janine, but then most of your writing is! Love and Light Jeanie
Philip G Bell	philip@bell-redbourn.freeserve.co.uk		10/26/2000 3:37:01 PM
This is awesome Janine, I love Arthurian Tales - Philip
Jenn Stone	DemonicAngyl@webtv.net		11/6/2000 9:43:58 PM
I truely like this poem... great stuff....
Blaque Velvet			6/16/2001 6:55:51 AM
Your poem has some really good use of words "milky mist... and look inward." Keep writing your unique and creative poetry.
Serenity1			6/16/2001 6:58:22 AM
Excellent poem, you are a very good writer and I very much enjoyed reading your poem.
Janine Daniel			7/1/2001 11:58:30 AM
I won 1st Runner-Up Topic Winner 6/18/01 with this poem.
Wolf			7/1/2001 12:01:51 PM
Very nicely done Janine...I enjoyed it very much. Some really great lines!
Rachelle Wiegand			7/1/2001 12:06:51 PM
Janine, A magical little ditty here! The entire piece from start to finish..... These lines are pure magic: Feel me ..... hear me ..... I burn to be heard! I stare into my ball as I look inwards To the very centre of your being ..... your soul So much magic I feel as I sit here and ponder I wonder ........ As I wave my hand A white flash, a blinding light I disappear ......... WOW! Zowie! GREAT WORK! Excellent display of poeticism! Is that a word? LOL...Anyway, WELL DONE.....YOU GO!! ~Rachelle
Shannon Wendler			7/1/2001 12:10:10 PM
Well done Janine! You are like Joveac, you do so well with these topics! CONGRATS!!!!!!! Shannon
Dennis			11/21/2003 11:26:44 PM
This was awesome Janine, nice to read you again! Dennis~
Minetta			11/21/2003 11:28:47 PM
I love Merlin!!!!!! Aurthurian stories just delight me... this was wonderful!!!!!!!! It is great to read you again!!! Have misssed you!!!! Minnetta
Leigh			11/21/2003 11:30:50 PM
SO GOOD to see you posting again, Janine!!! This is a wondrous piece, full of your very special kind of magic!! Leigh
Debbie			11/21/2003 11:32:21 PM
I absolutely LOVE this, Janine!!! Filled with magic, indeed!!! This poem made my spirit soar! WONDERFUL read! Debbie
Daniel A. Stafford			11/21/2003 11:34:06 PM
Janine, this always was a favorite of yours with me. I remember it from that other dimension we'd occasionally visit. It's good to read it again, so magical and free spirited. Missed your shining stories around here. Dan
Marcia Ellen Beevre			11/21/2003 11:35:46 PM
I love to swim in your poetry pool, Janine!! Your writing is soooo original, sooo magical!! Good to see you posting again!! Missed ya!! That Happy Chica Marcia Ellen Beevre
Bing			4/11/2004 4:28:01 AM
Beautiful, Janine! i could almost feel myself in the part. again, thank you.
Shiela			4/12/2004 9:39:06 AM
I'm no literary critic.....but for what it's worth, I like it.
crazyacet2			8/3/2005 4:08:09 AM
This is a great poem Janine. The thought of the rune of power: QUOTE I hold in my hand the rune of power Patiently I wait for the midnight hour When the stars align across the sky And the silvery moon has risen up high I raise my hands towards the moon Quietly I chant the word of the rune I close my eyes and start to sway Hear me Merlin and feel what I say This reminds me of an old gaelic legend, about the virgin that could summon Merlin's power on the Midsummers nights eve. I am not sure if this is based upon that legend or not, but it is a very powerful wording, incorporating quite a few different myths and legend into it. Good job. And you say that I am versatile and talented. (bowing) I yield to your wisdom and talent. Jared
eternity7112			8/4/2005 5:21:30 AM
Well Miss Janine you know how to do it the way it is suppose to be done! I agree with Jared this is perfect and very powerful writing.
SandDollar1			8/10/2005 11:59:13 AM
Janine, This is magical in every way. Love it! Annette
MysticWings575			8/10/2005 12:01:29 PM
There is magic in every word. I liked it. Mystic
whatup64106			8/10/2005 12:03:42 PM
I think Merlin definitely heard ya with this beauty. If not then he's got wax build-up going on again.
Cheyanne			8/10/2005 12:08:20 PM
WOW! whoo....... Good read here Janine. A write that totally lifts the readers spirit! I felt as if I could FLY!!!! I was saying YEAH! Hear me too Merlin!!!! I love this part, QUOTE Hear me Merlin and feel what I say Now I'm strong, I'm filled with magic I'm no longer weak............no longer tragic! Feel my strength......... .I start to sing I'm free, I'm free! I open my new wings I gracefully bow then leap into the sky WOW............ look at me Merlin, I can FLY! Behold the wonders of your sight As I soar off silently into the night. *Cheyanne*
Dartmistress			8/11/2005 12:23:40 PM
A delightful poem that fits here perfectly. Irene
poeticpiers			8/11/2005 12:26:06 PM
Fantasies that can be shared Janine are the life blood of poetry. Greetings to a new friend Ivor
Janine Daniel	janine@spinnys.com	www.spinnys.com	8/15/2005 5:46:46 AM
Poem nominated for Poem Of The Week at Flowing Quills Poetry forum. 11/8/05
Blueberry Kitten			8/15/2005 5:49:23 AM
Congrats on the nomination. You have reached the right audience. Curtis
guardianofthenight			8/15/2005 5:52:21 AM
Woooooo.........I just made the same comment on another poem in here. IT LIFTS THE SPIRIT! This is why I love fantasy poetry. It is full of magic and imagination! Writers I think expand a lot in this type of writing. And you Janine are living proof of that. ~Amy~
OCTOGENARIAN			8/16/2005 5:40:42 AM
this had some really good stuff in it
lhrdina90			9/14/2005 3:40:57 AM
Hey Janine, I thought I posted on this but I guess not, sorry. I love your style of writing and the creative imagination that you have. Wonderful job on this poem.. Lori
amitabhmitra			1/22/2006 10:07:50 AM
A wonderful poem I start to sing...... I'm free, I'm free! I open my new wings I gracefully bow then leap into the sky WOW…..look at me Merlin...I can FLY! Behold the wonders of your sight as I soar off silently into the night. It’s a wonderful experience Amitabh
angeliclights			1/26/2006 4:37:38 AM
I love fantasy poetry. I wish there was more of it. And this poem is exactly why! Magical writing Janine. Very magical. I close my eyes and start to sway hear me Merlin and feel what I say now I'm strong, I'm filled with magic I'm no longer weak..no longer tragic! Feel my strength..I start to sing...... I'm free, I'm free! I open my new wings I gracefully bow then leap into the sky WOW..look at me Merlin...I can FLY! Behold the wonders of your sight as I soar off silently into the night.
MidnightRose			1/26/2006 4:38:59 AM
One of my faves by you Janine. Yes, this is magical! I want to act out each line I read. Like where you sway etc...I love that. A poem that is a must re-read! ~Amy~
lhrdina90			1/26/2006 4:40:50 AM
One of my favorite poems Janine, I never get tired of reading this one; every time I read it I learn something new from it. Awesome Lori
Mindings			2/1/2006 9:18:14 AM
Well, you know me well enough to know that I am going to enjoy this Janine. Keep them coming my Ozzie Friend!

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