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Janine Daniel7/28/2000 12:42:11 PM
9/4/2010 9:57:31 PM
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Heartfelt Dreams And Butterfly Kisses

Heartfelt dreams......

I've been thinking about you tonight,
How when we're together it feels just right,
Crazy thoughts running through my head,
Hearing an echo of what you said.

My darling man I love you too......

My sweetheart.... man of my dreams,
After all these years I can still feel,
That wonderful feeling in my heart,
Whether we're connected or far apart.

I cried........

Tonight I was singing a favorite song,
When a wave of emotion swept me along,
To our secret place my feelings flew,
I was singing..... "I want to make it with you".

Overwhelming feelings......

I want to tell you right now,
And I need you to understand how,
When I say eu te amo sempre,
A wonderful feeling.... my rising temperature.

And my heart is pounding.....

Just thinking of you does this,
I close my eyes.... imagine our kiss,
Sigh......... can you feel me right now?
Let me soothe your troubled brow.

Butterfly kisses.......

Oh so gently upon your lips,
I kiss and then I whisper a wish........
I love you more than I can say,
Of this I hope my words convey.

Eu te amo sempre querido .... I love you.

By: Janine Daniel

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Love given and received freely is the purest gift of all.

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Janine Danieljanine@spinnys.comwww.spinnys.com

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Suebttfly9@yahoo.comhttp://www.geocities.com/Heartland/Garden/98437/28/2000 9:46:54 PM
Someone must be really special to have poem written for them!
Daniel A. Staffordaqmstaffo@mailbag.com8/2/2000 5:22:14 AM
Janine, wonderful, touching poem, and congratulation on the win!
You definitely deserve it.
willie h warrenwilliehw@earthlink.net8/6/2000 5:26:35 AM
willie h warrenwilliehw@earthlink.netno site8/6/2000 6:07:12 AM
please excuse if you receive my prior attempt to congrat you,Congrats!!And may you continue to receive blessings you deserve them! I haven't the talent to write serious poetry. Only lightverse, But here you revealed a glimpse at your soul. You bring back memories,of yesteryears,decades.
KatKatzMeowSS@netscape.net8/7/2000 4:55:56 PM
A very beautiful and touching poem. It's no wonder you were a winner!! Congradulations.
:)
Christinatigris@primus.com.auhttp://www.geocities.com/tigrispoet/8/22/2000 3:29:33 AM
Janine - a wonderful poem about a very special person....very touching and beautiful. Your talent for bearing your soul in poetry is indeed a gift to be treasured and nurtured. Congratulations on the win, and never forget the beauty.....
Helder 'Cat' Araujofirecat.pantherus@gte.net8/30/2000 10:29:18 PM
Spinny's Poetry is like a breath of fresh air in today’s often blurred and hectic world...

She has all the potential and talent to be one of the new Millenniums Greatest Poets...

Not only does her poetry express so much feeling and thought, but also it brings back Memories upon which I as a reader can reflect and relate upon.

All I can say is 'Bravo' for a God that hasn't yet abandoned us all, and the Proof lays in one such as you, Lady...

Keep up the Great work, and I'll keep up my intended reading of all that you can create for my reading Pleasure... :)

'Te Amo', Spinny
Shannon Wendler2/9/2001 6:21:10 AM
Beautiful, Janine!

Flutterwings2/9/2001 6:23:30 AM
Great rhythm and rhyme...
Smooth fluid read!
A heart throb! ((~.~))
Simply Poeticsimply-poetic@webtv.net10/6/2000 6:54:45 PM
Janine, How beautiful, and how "romantic". You must be a romantic at heart.
I really like this poem, and I like the way you put that one-liner in there
too!!
Jillian Stonejillian2486@hotmail.com10/6/2000 7:28:25 PM
Very passionate and heart warming, love ah sweet love!
I like the way you put one line in-between. Nice touch!

Jill
Philip G Bellphilip@bell-redbourn.freeserve.co.uk10/11/2000 11:50:41 AM
Wonderful.

I wrote a piece a while back called Butterfly Kiss.
Here we understand that to be a touch of an eyelash against a cheek.

Philip

Justice Chikandaminaaki@utande.co.zw10/11/2000 12:47:32 PM
A well written and beautiful romantic poem.

-Justice
Janine Danielspinnys@hotmail.comwww.spinnys.com11/6/2000 9:39:33 AM
*This poem was Lightverse's Winner of the Month for July*
APoetsPerspective2/6/2001 7:11:54 AM
Janine, I did not add my comment to this poem yet, but having chosen it as a winner, and now reading it again, it means more and is even better than when I first read it!

-j
Janine Daniel2/14/2001 10:43:22 AM
I won third runner-up in a Valentine's Day contest with this poem.
Jillian Stone2/23/2001 5:51:33 AM
Congats Janine a lovely poem!

Jill
Daniel A. Staffordaqmstaffo@mailbag.com11/1/2002 12:44:33 AM
Janine, i was just going through and looking at the top poems on the active list at lightverse. This one is still far up the list, and still beautiful. Hope you are doing well.

Dan
Jenniejs_18izahottie@yahoo.comyahoo.com3/29/2003 8:50:05 AM
Janine,

Hi, I just want to say beautiful poem. I loved it. Keep up the awesome writing.

Sincerely,
Jennie
Bing6/27/2004 9:13:56 AM
I can almost hear a tune in my head as I read this!

Wow!
Bessie6/28/2004 10:51:21 AM
This one brought tears to my eyes as I read it, I thought of my folks who are still very much in love (after 47 years) and hold each other high on pedestals.

I don't mind these kind of tears...thanks again for sharing.
Shiela7/31/2004 11:03:17 AM
This is a very moving poem.

Emotionally fuelled.

Thank you for sharing that.
Alaura dus9/12/2005 6:32:13 AM
awww.. I love the feelings you express in this poem, Janine :) They are wonderful!

~Alaura
poeticpiers9/12/2005 6:34:28 AM
A very lucky man to have someone who can express her feelings so beautifully.

Ivor
Janine Danieljanine@spinnys.comwww.spinnys.com9/14/2005 3:45:51 AM
Today this poem was given an award called "Language Of The Heart Award" by Joelsz from Flowing Quills Poetry forum, 12/9/05
joelsz9/14/2005 3:47:42 AM
Beautifully penned. Very well done.
..
Joelsz
ThaPoeticFire9/14/2005 3:49:03 AM
Lovely treasure ...Beautifully penned ...

Robert
Aka TPF
whatup641069/19/2005 3:49:08 AM
Now this is romantic. Very nice. :)

Mike.
Janine Danieljanine@spinnys.comwww.spinnys.com9/19/2005 3:51:59 AM
I received the Poem Of The Week award for this poem at Flowing Quills Poetry Forum, 18th Sept 2005
SandDollar19/19/2005 3:54:02 AM
Congrats on receiving recognition for this week's Poem of the Week!

Annette
Wanda Fable Weaver9/19/2005 3:55:35 AM
Janine, Congratulations on winning the P.O.W. award with this write.

Wanda
MysticWings5759/20/2005 3:19:26 AM
This is a true beauty. Congrats on the win.

Mystic

 
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